I miss you today

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I miss you today

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I try not to think about you, but
I miss you today
so many memories
so many communications
Who said
even a grain of sand
I treasured it
even sunrise and sunset
I could not forget them
these lively faces
how could I remove them from
my memories
I try not to think about your voice
I will miss talking to you
I try not to think about your smile
I will miss seeing you
I try not to think about our communications, but
I read your farewell letter again
I read the sadness again
I miss your thoughtfulness
I miss our perfect partnership
I can only assume that
at this moment
you miss me too, although
somewhere else, you are silent

Author: Min Min
http://w167.wrzuta.pl/sr/f/aujkf6h9Fje/ ... r_life.mp3


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Post by Netyoda »

Very poignant, and beautiful!

Made me think of my ex, although the farewell letter was a knife in the stomach ;)

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Netyoda wrote:Very poignant, and beautiful!

Made me think of my ex, although the farewell letter was a knife in the stomach ;)

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Post by Karenh »

Very good, but so though provoking ~ Its made me think a bit of my ex to! :cry:
A day without laughter is a day wasted! :lol: ;)
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thats why me done it :P
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